Correction Key Handout and a New Link

Here you can find the Peer-Edit and Correction and Commentary Key handed out on 9/30. I'm hoping that having this electronic copy will increase your use of the document as you review and revise your first draft of Essay #1.

Please note that a few symbol additions have been made. A few, paraphrased, appear below

• 86 = remove; essentially the same as a strikethrough
• coll = marks colloquial, everyday speech which should be changed to a more formal diction
• frag = indicates an incomplete sentence, thus a fragment

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I have also included a new link. Now you can easily access your York College Student Email account by looking under the On-Campus Links on the left-side toolbar. Hooray!